HELPING: Second-graders hope you can assist them in a donation decision. Read their pitches! (updated)

(WSB photo, May 2021)

Room 12 at Lafayette Elementary has a request for you: Help them decide which charity should receive the $50 left in their classroom fund. Their teacher, Chelsea Gabzdyl, explained that she gave the students a writing project, to convince her who shold get the money, and, “One idea I had is for their writing pieces to be published on the West Seattle Blog so we can raise even more money and give to many different organizations.” She sent us 12 students’ pitches. If you can spare a few minutes, read them, comment with your thoughts on which case is the most compelling, maybe even consider donating yourself. Here are the students’ writeups, as sent by their teacher:

Zoe’s opinion:

I have Native Americans in my family so I love animals. Help the wildlife by donating money to the Wildlife Conservation Society. Help the animals that need help because of predators. People should not kill animals for fun. Help them please! Donate money to the Wildlife Conservation Society. Help the Wildlife Conservation Society. And more predators the more trees! How long does it take for a sloth to digest its food? One week!

Missy’s opinion:

I think we should do Saint Jude because it helps people like some people are paralyzed. That means: people can’t move a specific part in their body. That’s not good at all. Others have cancer and that’s not good ether because some kids die and we don’t want that to happen at all. If we give the money to Saint Jude because kids all over the world will know they are safe and happy.

Louise’s opinion:

Would you like to help people in need of food because I would and it makes me happy to see people help people. People should have food and water. People also shouldn’t suffer. People shouldn’t starve. I get mad when I see that people are not caring about people.

Jasper’s opinion:

Hi! Do you like animals? Then read on! In my opinion, the money should go to the Wildlife Conservation Society because I think animals should be healthy and safe. First of all they are good for the environment. Secondly, animals are nice! Lastly, they are adorable!!! That’s why I believe that the money should go to the wildlife conservation society!

Alaska’s opinion:

If you like animals then keep reading! I think the Wildlife Conservation Society should get the money because we will all have food, we can see cute animals, and the world will be beautiful.

Walter’s opinion:

We should give the money to the Ronald McDonald House because it can help families. Secondly, they can make money to help families. Last, families take care of babies and if you don’t take care of babies they won’t have a home.

Lucy’s opinion:

I think animals are very special and I want to have more experiences with animals. If you are an animal lover like me keep reading. Help wildlife by donating money to the Wildlife Conservation Society. Help the animals that need help! Mostly the animals that are hurt! Start loving them and stop hating them. People should not kill animals for fun because it is so rude! Would you want that? I wouldn’t. Help them please don’t kill! They don’t deserve it and you wouldn’t either. Animals should live in peace like we want to stop killing and start caring!

Ray’s opinion:

I think we need more animals because we can see new things. I think the Wildlife Conservation Society should get the money because more animals make more food. More animals make more fertilizer and more trees. More trees make more fresh air. Now you see why I feel that we need more animals.

Cora’s opinion:

I think we should give the money to all 10 charities because then all 10 of them get money and more things will be helped because of us. Secondly all 10 charities will be able to help things that otherwise would not. No one would be upset that the money went to the place they did not want because it would go to all 10 charities. That’s why I think we should give the money to all 10 charities.

Lilah’s opinion:

Do you love animals? In my opinion, the money should be donated to the Wildlife Conservation Society for these reasons. The bees are animals they help trees and the trees help us breathe. If there are more animals there will be more food. We love animals and we can hunt if there are more animals to have a balance. When we help it makes us happy. We can do more science! Our Earth will grow! And to sum it up, I love animals.

Trafford’s opinion:

My name is Trafford and this is my opinion about helping people have food. In my opinion, Share Our Strength is a good choice. First of all, my mom had childhood hunger. It can happen in many ways. Kids are not as resilient as adults and are more vulnerable. That’s why I chose share our strength.

Aiden’s opinion:

I think that the money should go to KaBOOM! because they build the playgrounds. Now you can see why Kaboom should get the money.

(We don’t have the list of all 10 charities they’re considering but will add it if and when we get it.)

ADDED 9:30 AM THURSDAY: First, teacher Chelsea just sent two more students’ pitches:

Mikol’s opinion:

Do you like the Seattle Animal Shelter? Well I’m gonna make you like it even more! First of all, if you donate to the Seattle Animal Shelter your donation goes directly to helping staff and volunteers perform life-saving work. Also, if you donate it helps prevent animal homelessness. Lastly, if you donate it helps fix animal cruelty so that’s why we should spend our money on the Seattle Animal Shelter.

Charlee’s opinion (in support of Share Our Strength):

My opinion is to give anything people need especially homeless people. So we can Share Our Strength and we can make a better world when we come together we can help each other get more food and water and medicine. It makes me sad and mad when I see people in need but nobody is helping them.

Second, she says the students have added to the fund – $152 more from “what kids have saved up and brought in themselves!”

39 Replies to "HELPING: Second-graders hope you can assist them in a donation decision. Read their pitches! (updated)"

  • H the original June 28, 2023 (9:35 pm)

    Amazing work by all! I love Cora’s idea to spread the donations!

  • Hbf June 28, 2023 (9:38 pm)

    Thank you all for sharing your ideas.   I thought Trafford’s recommendation of Share Our Strength was a great one.  

  • Marina June 28, 2023 (9:49 pm)

    Some compelling arguments for the Wildlife Conservation Society. They get my vote. 

  • LJ June 28, 2023 (9:56 pm)

    Hmmm…Very tough choice! I really enjoyed Jasper’s write up. 

  • Lizzy June 28, 2023 (10:29 pm)

    I’m convinced by Trafford! But also St Jude and Ronald McDonald! So tough. Maybe Cora is right on this one. Thanks for the post!

  • John June 28, 2023 (10:35 pm)

    Zoe’s bonus closing fact won me over.

    • WS4life June 29, 2023 (7:56 am)

      Me too! 

  • CanSky June 28, 2023 (10:54 pm)

    So awesome… I’d vote the animals too!

  • Slide guy June 28, 2023 (11:00 pm)

    I’ve always had a soft spot for playgrounds. Kaboom!

  • Rb June 29, 2023 (12:38 am)

    I vote for kaboom as well. 

  • Ferns June 29, 2023 (3:51 am)

    Kudos to teacher Chelsea for such a clever thinking and writing assignment. It’s never too young to expose children to philanthropy. Fun to see so many examples of young students formulating ideas and arguments; sharing their enthusiasm. Thank you. 

  • miws June 29, 2023 (6:00 am)

    I’m with Cora. It’s always so difficult to choose one out of several worthy charities. —Mike

  • Liz June 29, 2023 (7:11 am)

    All of the opinions are great, but I really enjoyed Jasper’s. I also think majority should rule and my vote goes to the Wildlife Conservation Society because “animals are nice!” 

  • SLJ June 29, 2023 (7:46 am)

    What a great idea! I vote for Wildlife simply because it has the most kid votes. All are great. Thanks for sharing!

  • Gina June 29, 2023 (7:51 am)

    Cora’s, 5 bucks to each.

  • Susan June 29, 2023 (7:58 am)

    Very passionate, convincing essays all! I like Cora’s idea of spreading the love evenly to all 10 organizations. If everyone reading the article can also donate 5.00 to each charity think of the impact it would make! 

  • KT June 29, 2023 (8:03 am)

    Are those funds leftover from the PTA allotment?  Seems strange they wouldn’t just keep them for the next school year since the PTA is constantly fundraising to support the school.

    • WSB June 29, 2023 (10:02 am)

      Yes, teacher Chelsea says the original $50 (note the new info that the kids have brought in more) was from the PTA.

    • Ferns June 29, 2023 (10:36 am)

      Maybe. That 50 bucks seems like a really cheap lesson for a classroom of second graders to experience generosity, decision making and feel good about themselves as givers. If you think about it, it must feel  empowering since kids are always having to ask and beg for everything they need from adults. There could also be rules in place about rolling over budgets or not. Like if you don’t use your whole budget, you might not get that much next year and it hurts next year when circumstances are different. Spend it or lose it. 

  • K June 29, 2023 (8:23 am)

    Trafford’s was great! I vote for Share our Strength

  • revilo June 29, 2023 (8:36 am)

    Cora’s.

  • D-Mom June 29, 2023 (8:36 am)

    Jasper has a strong future as a persuasive writer!  But I also love Cora’s choice to support everyone. All were a joy to read!

  • Jennifer June 29, 2023 (9:08 am)

    I enjoyed reading all the writeups. Good job kids! Hang on to that feeling of making the world a better place as you get older. I think they all did a great job but I think the Wildlife Conservation Society should get the donation. 

  • Lezlie June 29, 2023 (9:24 am)

    How do we contribute to the fund?

  • Great idea June 29, 2023 (9:40 am)

    Trafford’s made the most persuasive and simple appeal for me.

  • WS Mom June 29, 2023 (9:48 am)

    Yes!  Exactly how can we donate to support your marvelous efforts???????

  • WSB June 29, 2023 (9:52 am)

    Note that as of 9:30 am, we just added two more students’ opinions sent by teacher Chelsea. She also says the kids have brought in additional $ they raised/saved.

  • WS Mom June 29, 2023 (10:18 am)

    Great effort, huge thank you to these caring students! Donations to Wildlife Conservation Society are currently being TRIPLED by a generous donor.  Go to http://www.wcs.org/

  • DaveB June 29, 2023 (12:18 pm)

    I’m with Louise. If the class chooses this option and is looking for suggestions for a hunger-related charity, I volunteer at Backpack Brigade, which provides weekend meals during the school year for kids who are enrolled in free and subsidized lunch programs.

  • Kersti Elisabeth Muul June 29, 2023 (3:24 pm)

    Wildlife conservation is mandatory.  So happy they are sharing the wildlife/tree connection. many adults still don’t get it….

  • WSB June 29, 2023 (3:58 pm)

    For those asking how to contribute, teacher Chelsea just set up a crowdfunding page.
    We will of course follow up with however all this turns out.
    https://www.gofundme.com/f/students-contribute-to-causes-they-care-about

  • Jeannie June 29, 2023 (4:17 pm)

    Kudos to these smart, compassionate kids – and to their teacher! I can’t choose just one essay – all are great – but I’m for the Wildlife Conservation. It’s highly rated by Charity Navigator, PLUS, donations at this time are being tripled, as  WS Mom noted. Chelsea would receive a monthly wildlife newsletter, which she can share with her students, too.

  • A June 29, 2023 (5:52 pm)

    Louise has it right. Support fellow people. This is the only way.

  • Meg June 29, 2023 (7:52 pm)

    Zoe, Jasper, and Lucy! We love the animals! But Cora has a  great idea too! Such a fun project!

  • LS June 29, 2023 (9:56 pm)

    Those looking to donate: Please consider donating to title 1 schools, and other schools that don’t have any “extra” PTA funds. Many of these schools don’t have parents/families with extra time and money for fundraising, and may lack basic needs, not to mention the extra programs that these PTA funds often support. 

  • Its JC June 30, 2023 (5:00 am)

    Great reading!I vote Cora, not that it was more compelling writing just more in line with my values.What a great assignment.

  • RLV June 30, 2023 (12:36 pm)

    I vote for Trafford’s suggestion. 

  • Kris Fraser July 1, 2023 (5:10 pm)

    I appreciate how the teacher involved the children in the discussion about what to do with the extra funds. The children demonstrated knowledge about the subject and critical thinking skills which will benefit them throughout their lives and give me hope for our future leaders!

  • Katie July 5, 2023 (10:13 pm)

    I agree with Lucy! 

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